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Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - J-bit - 08-18-2008
I'm making a comic
so you'll probably hate this but beside's the very long credit's think of it in a good way!
RE: Smash Taunts - Alpha Six - 08-18-2008
eh... it has potential
RE: Smash Taunts - Perigi - 08-18-2008
Lol'd at Sonic
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - J-bit - 08-19-2008
Here is comic 2. It is WAY better than the first one.
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - J-bit - 08-19-2008
Couldn't help waiting to give out issue 3... A few problems.
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - dude 2.0 - 08-19-2008
this is so funny
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - Geo the Fox - 08-19-2008
Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.
Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.
...Fix these few things before you continue.
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - Alpha Six - 08-19-2008
(08-19-2008, 10:05 AM)J-bit Wrote: Here is comic 2. It is WAY better than the first one.nevermind
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - J-bit - 08-19-2008
(08-19-2008, 11:34 AM)Geo the Fox Wrote: Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.Sure.
Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.
...Fix these few things before you continue.
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - mors ontologica - 08-19-2008
(08-19-2008, 11:34 AM)Geo the Fox Wrote: Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.
Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.
...Fix these few things before you continue.
Pretty much this. I think if you redid the image of it, it'd be a hell of a lot better. Try and be consistant with things such as colour and layout. Also make sure that within the text bubble, all the letters are completely visible, rather than having the end letters cut off slightly. A re-working and it could be good.
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - Alpha Six - 08-19-2008
you should also invest in photoshop
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - J-bit - 08-19-2008
(08-19-2008, 11:43 AM)xTYVONx Wrote: you should also invest in photoshopThat's actually what I'm doing right now.
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - GrooveMan.exe - 08-19-2008
NO WAY IM HELPING THAT CARNAVOUR
God, learn to spell. If not, use a goddamn spell check.
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - Rakia - 08-19-2008
What the hell?
Why do you have blurry sprites?
Is it so hard to copy and paste something into MS Paint?
RE: Smash Taunts (comic updated daily) - J-bit - 08-19-2008
You guys will just have to live with the blurry sprites, anyways, speech bubbles and font are better. Nothing on sprites or jokes.