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You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-24-2008 EDIT: to prevent confusion, this is not SMB sprite, It's Earthbound related. Meh, I am not completely satisfied with it, right now I am trying to make a sheet with it. Anyways, criticism please! RE: You confronted a Starman! - theguy - 05-24-2008 Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok RE: You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-24-2008 tomster785 Wrote:Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... okLike this? Also added pallete RE: You confronted a Starman! - Pik - 05-24-2008 Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting. Stuff that's needed. RE: You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-24-2008 pikspiksmaroator Wrote:Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting. Got it, right now I am gonna take a break from spriting though, Now on my to do list. RE: You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-25-2008 Made new shape (In front view) just wan to be sure it is alright before I go in to detail, also ignore second pallete. (also I added crits on sheet for reminder) RE: You confronted a Starman! - Wavey - 05-25-2008 Bigger torso, plz, arms look too straight and edgy, make them smoother and curvy. RE: You confronted a Starman! - Chdonga - 05-25-2008 I don't see any thing bad about it... wait, don't Starmen have pointy heads, or is that just one kind of Starman? RE: You confronted a Starman! - Wavey - 05-25-2008 No they don't have pointy heads. :/ RE: You confronted a Starman! - Chdonga - 05-25-2008 None of 'em? Hmph must be a different Starman I'm thinking of then... BTW-Starman kicks ass! RE: You confronted a Starman! - Pik - 05-25-2008 Better. His body should be wider, and I like the second palette BTW. Though it still needs more contrast. RE: You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-31-2008 Meh, still could use more contrast.... Also new pallette. (And yet I can barely tell if I shaded it good since it's a bit small) |