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Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Zabi - 12-21-2008 Hey there c: WIP Some C&C would be nice. RE: Gumo Gumo no WIP! - Gors - 12-21-2008 erm... it's Gomu Gomu >_> very smooth shading you've got there. Just don't make his body stiff like you have in the lineart. RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Quinlan Vos - 12-21-2008 The smile looks crooked, but that is probably what you were trying to do. I love the shading on the inside of the hat. RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Tero - 12-21-2008 His hair goes down a bit more, but otherwise good job. RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Zabi - 12-21-2008 Thanks for the comments Update, I fixed the smile and made some better pose. RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Zabi - 12-22-2008 Sorry for double post. Finished Luffy and started Zoro. I tried to do something about the boring leg pose, but I can't do this right. It would have made it worse. Spriting these guys is quite fun RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Eddo - 12-22-2008 Not bad, keep it up! RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Zabi - 12-23-2008 Update: Man, this guy is really tough... RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Naruto Namikaze - 12-23-2008 Looks good but Zolo is too short and Ruffys' feet look strange. RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - triptych - 12-23-2008 really too lazy to do an edit right now, but you could make these a lot better if you started shading to show depth instead of just shading to shade you've sort of got a gradient style thing right now and it's taking a lot away from the piece RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Zabi - 12-23-2008 yea, you're right, especially the clothes look kinda flat :/ I'll try to fix that and edit this post later. Until then, I'll show you the finished Zoro: edited the image. 1 is old, 2 is new. I hope I didn't overdo it... RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Naruto Namikaze - 12-23-2008 IMO the Second Zoro is better than the first cause his shading is better. RE: Gomu Gomu no WIP! - Asuran - 12-23-2008 I'll just deal with Luffy. Good start, but I would suggest removing the highlight on the hat, that part contrasts with your apparent lightsource. Also, the clothes seem far too stiff, try adding wrinkles.