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DragonBreeZee Cell - Kasplant - 09-21-2018
Hi all,
I have a project going on where Im trying to make an ORPG based on Dragon Ball. Graphics Im using are from the old Breeze Revolution tiles/sprites and I have added my custom stuff.
Wanted to know what people think and if you are interested to see more!
![[Image: giphy.gif]](https://media.giphy.com/media/LoNSPv2jm7UsIDx4nb/giphy.gif)
RE: DragonBreeZee Cell - JewyB - 10-01-2018
Oaky, i quickly looked up Breeze Revolution and am no expert but i have a few suggestions in general.
Your sprite needs a lot more contrast in the colours selected, right now its not super readable, and the shading is barely visible at all, more contrast will help the image pop. Second, i think you need to alter the proportions on the face a little, based on what i could see, the eyes are much bigger, which i think will help the sprite also, i do believe cells eyes actually just touch on his beak. I think maybe make the peak of his... Top... Head-arrow-spike-helmet(what is the right word?) dip a bit more as right now it looks flat.
I like your attention to details, i think your colour choice just needs work, and a little work on readability.
Also, i love anyone who sprites anything from DBZ so i look forward to seeing you improve and seeing more of your work!
RE: DragonBreeZee Cell - Kasplant - 10-16-2018
(10-01-2018, 03:45 PM)JewyB Wrote: Oaky, i quickly looked up Breeze Revolution and am no expert but i have a few suggestions in general.
Your sprite needs a lot more contrast in the colours selected, right now its not super readable, and the shading is barely visible at all, more contrast will help the image pop. Second, i think you need to alter the proportions on the face a little, based on what i could see, the eyes are much bigger, which i think will help the sprite also, i do believe cells eyes actually just touch on his beak. I think maybe make the peak of his... Top... Head-arrow-spike-helmet(what is the right word?) dip a bit more as right now it looks flat.
I like your attention to details, i think your colour choice just needs work, and a little work on readability.
Also, i love anyone who sprites anything from DBZ so i look forward to seeing you improve and seeing more of your work!
Hi,
Sorry I haven't replied before but apparently I don't get notified of replies! :
Thanks for the feedback! Others have mentioned the colour choices and I do agree I need to work on that, so I will!
I think I chose better colours in this one:
![[Image: giphy__r13881752031.gif]](http://pixeljoint.com/files/icons/giphy__r13881752031.gif){kind=icon}
Still learning a lot, so I appreciate any kind of feedback!
RE: DragonBreeZee Cell - JewyB - 10-17-2018
The colours are definitely coming a long a lot better, i would say to have a bit more contrast between your highlights and other shades however, as right now your lightest shade is a little too close to your base colour, in my opinion. The readability is definitely improved fro mthe cell sprite, but it seems like your lack of contrast is a major issue, as i THINK the body is shaded but can't quite tell.