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A Song I Wrote <3 - Nitro - 05-27-2008
When A Breeze Of Wind
Comes Down In Your Face
You Get A Bit Of The Very Dry Taste
When The Ground Twists And Turns
Growls And Burns
You Can See The Evil Smirk
When The Water Makes A Splash
And Whips To Your Face
You Feel So Hasty No Time To Waste
When The Moon Does A Sparkle
A Twinkle And A Blush
It Lights Up Your Eyes Like A Butter-Fly
When The Sun Shines Your Eyes
Its Beauty And Its Heat
Lights Up Your Head To Your Feet
A Rose Has A Thorn
Breaks Your Heart
But Lifes Been Good
Its Time To Depart
I Wrote It A Few Days Ago, Like It?
RE: A Song I Wrote <3 - Darklink - 05-27-2008
It's a bit emo. Right now it's in poem form. Without instrumentals etc. a song is a poem. Just so you know that.
RE: A Song I Wrote <3 - Spy - 05-27-2008
Darklink Wrote:It's a bit emo.ohoho owned
but i like it i had to pee with every paragraph so i cant seem to read it all at once
RE: A Song I Wrote <3 - mors ontologica - 05-27-2008
It's not bad, but why does Every Word Have A Capitol?
Capitols are for the beginning of sentences and nouns.
Other than that yeah not bad.