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[PIXELART/DESKTOP] Justyn and Tyvon Promo Desktops - Alpha Six - 01-22-2009
I had the biggest burst of inspiration about three hours ago, so I started this;
![[Image: 1024x768promofn2.png]](http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/1913/1024x768promofn2.png)
as you can see, i'm cleaning up the lines and shading right now
RE: [PIXELART/DESKTOP] Justyn and Tyvon Promo Desktops - Rakia - 01-22-2009
That's really awesome.
I love how it's turning out so far.
RE: [PIXELART/DESKTOP] Justyn and Tyvon Promo Desktops - Alpha Six - 01-22-2009
decided to shorten the image until i actually do the rest of it (i.e. the background and J&T logo)
![[Image: Tyvon_PROMO.PNG]](http://h1.ripway.com/pixeltempo/projects/justyntyvon/Tyvon_PROMO.PNG)
RE: [PIXELART/DESKTOP] Justyn and Tyvon Promo Desktops - Alpha Six - 01-22-2009
i am not a photoshop pro, believe it or not
![[Image: 1024x768tyvonpromolz1.png]](http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/5301/1024x768tyvonpromolz1.png)
RE: [PIXELART/DESKTOP] Justyn and Tyvon Promo Desktops - Skink - 01-22-2009
Make the right thigh skinnier.
RE: [PIXELART/DESKTOP] Justyn and Tyvon Promo Desktops - Ninspriterx - 01-22-2009
That's pretty rad, dude.
Though the shading on the left cheek looks weird IMO.
RE: [PIXELART/DESKTOP] Justyn and Tyvon Promo Desktops - Chris2Balls [:B] - 01-22-2009
The tshirt's a bit strange: would it really cling to the body?
I think the pelvis area should be made narrower and that the headphone's frame should be bigger (would it fit properly on his head?)
The shading is a bit off on the sleeve on the right, and the belt could be improved. Maybe make him grab the machine gun more firmly.
There's a bit of blue after the rifle's magasine, you could give the beige material more texture plus place more shading on the barrel.
Other than that, I love the hair and style
RE: [PIXELART/DESKTOP] Justyn and Tyvon Promo Desktops - Alpha Six - 01-22-2009
(01-22-2009, 04:25 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote: The tshirt's a bit strange: would it really cling to the body?i wear tight shirts/pants
RE: [PIXELART/DESKTOP] Justyn and Tyvon Promo Desktops - Chutzpar - 01-22-2009
Yeah, but even with really tight clothing you get more folds in it
unless it is like painted on.
I get that you're not going for a super detailed style though. I'd suggest putting just a couple folds around the armpit + shoulder, and then some where the shirt's behind the belt. Don't go crazy obviously, just enough to make it look like it has some form
The legs are kinda weirding me out
for a start the left leg (our right) is like twice as thick as the other one, and its shaped kinda like a chicken leg
The AAing is really nice and the face looks great but the rest of the body just looks awkward in places
(sorry that this is kind of a shitty critique my brain is not functioning today)