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Larxene - Cesar - 02-27-2009

Ok, I made this Larxene from Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories.
[Image: Larx-pix.png]

C+C, please A_A

RE: Larxene - Goemar - 02-27-2009

Back of his/her (why can't Square characters have real genders?) skirt/coat is rather jaggy.
Feet look a bit odd to.

RE: Larxene - Cesar - 02-27-2009

It's a she xD
I think the part you say that is jaggy is what supposed to be her hood. Guess it didn't work out very nicely.

And I was never really good with feet anyway, but I'll try to fix it.

RE: Larxene - GrooveMan.exe - 02-27-2009

The hood seems to be too small to see from the front when not worn, so I wouldn't worry about representing it. I think her hair is a bit too saturated - she's more 'platinum' than that.

RE: Larxene - Cesar - 02-27-2009

I didn't quite understand that Ded
What's saturated?

RE: Larxene - Sol - 02-27-2009

(02-27-2009, 03:40 PM)Cesar Wrote: I didn't quite understand that Ded
What's saturated?

Her hair, he meant it's too yellow.

RE: Larxene - Cesar - 02-27-2009

Ohh, got it.
[Image: Larx-pix.png] - > [Image: Larx-pix-1.png]
Here it is. Took out the hood, changed the hair's color and changed the feet. =)

RE: Larxene - GrooveMan.exe - 02-27-2009

Much better, although her old left foot (the one pointing outwards) is better than the old one. It's a minor thing though.

RE: Larxene - Kenjitake - 02-27-2009

yes larxene is a "she"...
it's not very major, but to me the coat near her legs looks kinda off... idk, if you just look at it it just looks off. what I can see though is it does need some smoothing out down there, and thats about it.

RE: Larxene - Cesar - 02-27-2009

Ok... What exactly looks strange about it? @_@

RE: Larxene - Kenjitake - 02-27-2009

maybe my eyes are getting bad... it looks a little bit baggy/ big, there we go. and it needs to be smoothed out, then there ya have it! Wink

RE: Larxene - Cesar - 02-27-2009

Like this?
[Image: Larx-pix-2.png]

RE: Larxene - Kenjitake - 02-27-2009

yeah... there we go. now, smooth out her right leg (leg facing us) and it will be perfect.

RE: Larxene - Cesar - 02-27-2009

But smooth her right leg, where, exactly?

RE: Larxene - Kenjitake - 02-27-2009

this edge:
[Image: Larx-pix-2help.png]