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Some ol' old dude. - theguy - 05-30-2008

OLVery Sad
[Image: olddudehw5.gif]

Crits n' stuff plox.

EDIT:

I have done what BanefulKid said... and here is the latest version.
Also a few things I wanted to add.

NEW:
[Image: olddudeqi9.gif]

EDIT2: More things added.

RE: Some ol' old dude. - triptych - 05-30-2008

you know, for as long as you've been spriting you'd think you would improve a bit. try looking at some tutorials, and when you get advice actually apply what people tell you to the pixel they're talking about. don't go WELL OKAY I GET IT I'LL REMEMBER THAT FOR THE NEXT PIECE I DO BUT INSTEAD I'LL ACTUALLY IGNORE IT AND DO THE EXACT SAME THING I DID LAST TIME!!!

RE: Some ol' old dude. - TPoe - 05-31-2008

WHAT IS THAT, KILL IT

RE: Some ol' old dude. - theguy - 05-31-2008

NOT1up Wrote:you know, for as long as you've been spriting you'd think you would improve a bit. try looking at some tutorials, and when you get advice actually apply what people tell you to the pixel they're talking about. don't go WELL OKAY I GET IT I'LL REMEMBER THAT FOR THE NEXT PIECE I DO BUT INSTEAD I'LL ACTUALLY IGNORE IT AND DO THE EXACT SAME THING I DID LAST TIME!!!

Well thank you for your helpful criticism (you too Tpoe), also I usually actually DO the crits gave to me on that piece I got the crits for, instead of being lazy and using it on the next...

Also I have improved, what are talking about?

Now that is out of the way could I have some crits, considering it's what I put this on here for.

RE: Some ol' old dude. - Previous - 05-31-2008

He's falling backwards, his arm is too thin, the shadow on his stomach should be curved the other way, he doesn't look "old", ...
Just to point out some of the problems. There are more, i'd say.

Also, he lacks of feet.

RE: Some ol' old dude. - theguy - 05-31-2008

The arms were meant to be thin from a stylistic standpoint, and the shadow on his stomach doesn't necessarily have to be curved the other way but I will change that and everything else APART from the arms.

RE: Some ol' old dude. - triptych - 05-31-2008

Stylistic or not, you pulled it off wrong and the arms look too thin

RE: Some ol' old dude. - mozzy - 05-31-2008

seriously guys its not even that bad

RE: Some ol' old dude. - theguy - 05-31-2008

fine

I'll edit the arms.

EDIT:

@Mozzy: Thanks. The first to notice it's not bad...