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Advice, please? - Emma - 03-17-2009 Kay, so. First thing's first; is this anatomically correct, so far? I'm not sure if the torso's too long or not. :/ I'm not very good at art in general, so I figured I'd start with the figure, then add clothes later. RE: Advice, please? - Alpha Six - 03-17-2009 Chest is a teeny bit square and I think you need to put more curve in the torso. I think that's it so far, fix that and I'll probably be able to help more. RE: Advice, please? - Neslug - 03-17-2009 The shoulders might look better if they were a couple pixels higher up. Here's a small edit, some details changed a bit: RE: Advice, please? - Emma - 03-17-2009 Rounded the chest and curved the torso a little more. edit; thanks, neslug. i'll take it into consideration on my next edit. RE: Advice, please? - Alpha Six - 03-17-2009 Looks better. The hips might be a very, very small bit too wide, try compressing them by 1 or 2 pixels. The curve is in the incorrect spot in the torso though, move the curve lower instead of so close to the chest. RE: Advice, please? - mozzy - 03-17-2009 Bring the hips in a few pixels. Otherwise, its fine. RE: Advice, please? - Emma - 03-17-2009 Better? RE: Advice, please? - Alpha Six - 03-17-2009 Looking a lot smoother now, but now the hips look kinda blocky. RE: Advice, please? - Emma - 03-17-2009 blargh. x[ it'll probably look better coloured/shaded. which i suck at, so. |D i'm also dreading adding a face and hair.