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Saki Kazami(original character by me) WIP - Kaolla Su - 05-07-2009 I think there is a something little weird...... I try to fix it, but it still looks weird... Can somebody point that weird place? sheet: CG picture: RE: Saki Kazami(original character by me) WIP - Caergrim - 05-07-2009 I think it looks great, but there are two weird places. 1: The right arm looks deformed. I recommend changing it so that it is held in a boxer's stance while jabbing. You could reference Muhammad Ali because he had a tendency to keep his hands at his side as opposed to his face. 2: The left leg should not buckle in during the punch. It should bend in the other direction somewhat. Aside from these two criticisms, I think it is awesome! RE: Saki Kazami(original character by me) WIP - Heinze - 05-07-2009 No it isn't great... you recolored the hair and didn't run of the original style, the CG Art have a strange coloring, and the lineart isn't that great... And Caergrim, nothing is great when you have these errors that you said... .-. RE: Saki Kazami(original character by me) WIP - Woppet* - 05-07-2009 how long are her legs? RE: Saki Kazami(original character by me) WIP - Kosheh - 05-07-2009 Twice the size of her torso according to the ref. :o |