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an updated/ better werehog sheet - Razorthecurse - 05-22-2009
this is what i have modified so far. free fell to comment tell me if im doin something wrong.
RE: an updated/ better werehog sheet - Chdonga - 05-22-2009
By modified do you mean edit, or what?
RE: an updated/ better werehog sheet - Razorthecurse - 05-22-2009
(05-22-2009, 11:20 PM)Chdonga Wrote: By modified do you mean edit, or what?no i meant i modified ( so i gess yeah edited) my other werehog sprite i had posted.
RE: an updated/ better werehog sheet - Stirred Drei Ling - 05-22-2009
You'll have to understand that certain terminology is the norm, edit instead of modified, custom is completely from scratch, ect...
I can't really see any shading, you need more contrast, and the chest fur changes colours on the sheet.
RE: an updated/ better werehog sheet - Razorthecurse - 05-22-2009
(05-22-2009, 11:45 PM)Robo-Trainer Drei Wrote: You'll have to understand that certain terminology is the norm, edit instead of modified, custom is completely from scratch, ect...k ill work on that. i guess.
I can't really see any shading, you need more contrast, and the chest fur changes colours on the sheet.
RE: an updated/ better werehog sheet - Cobalt Blue - 05-23-2009
woulditkill you tofuckingupload it toimageshack, please?
RE: an updated/ better werehog sheet - triptych - 05-23-2009
didn't JoeTE or whatever that guy was make this awhile back
this seriously just looks like another edit
RE: an updated/ better werehog sheet - Zee - 05-23-2009
Yes it is another edit, lets not have this argument again. It's a matter of helping razor get better.
What bothers me is that while he's standing the white portions of his hand have a black outline, yet the other portions of his white colored for his spines and such are not given the outline. And when he runs that black outline dissapears from the hands. I suggest a bit more consistency.
Don't take this the wrong way, but if you're aiming to improve your spriting abilities, do customs. They won't look as good and will have a lot of flaws, but then we can really help you out in the way of pointing out where your flaws are and then you can work on them. You can keep going edits, however heavy they may be, but working on your weak areas can really help you improve overall.
RE: an updated/ better werehog sheet - triptych - 05-23-2009
i really only brought it up because in his last topic he mentioned only posting a recolor to show how 'cruel we can be' or something
which i took as meaning he was going to do customs from now on
RE: an updated/ better werehog sheet - Atherant - 05-23-2009
Another issue I'd like to point out is the palette; it needs more contrast. This is most evident with the blues. Unless you can actually clearly define the colours used at 1x zoom, you have a problem.
But yes, I agree with what Zee said. I know you're probably getting sick of it after recent events, but customs will reveal your own personal weak points rather than mistakes you made whilst editing.