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steaming dump - tsr moderation staff - 06-13-2009 -WIP RE: steaming dump - Previous - 06-13-2009 Nice fluid animations. Well done. The skateboard pose where you see his back should have more hood movement, though, I'd say. RE: steaming dump - Torres. - 06-13-2009 In the jump animation, he stays in the air for too long. RE: steaming dump - Cobalt Blue - 06-13-2009 maybe because that doesnt really show how much he will move in the air. RE: steaming dump - Stirred Drei Ling - 06-13-2009 Oh hey, I should work on my character. I don't like the jump either, but everything else is awesome. RE: steaming dump - Omegakyogre - 06-13-2009 The only thing I'm unsure of is how you use black (or a color dark enough to look black) as your outline for everything, but the outline of his face is much lighter. It looks a bit inconsistent to me, especially since you don't do the same for his hands. The animations are great, though; nice job on those. RE: steaming dump - LeleleleMAXIMUM - 06-14-2009 I like the last dude, although I don't know what those purple things are on his scarf. Reminds me of Solar Boy Django. RE: steaming dump - tsr moderation staff - 06-14-2009 Previous- okay Torres/Drei- what metaru said estian- the only thing with a black outline is the hair RE: steaming dump - Metaboss - 06-14-2009 Great animation! RE: steaming dump - Zee - 06-14-2009 (06-14-2009, 06:57 PM)Metaboss Wrote: +1 Postcount ... Anyhow, I agree there should be some more movement on the skateboard, and the jump seems a hair too long. The jump feels like it'd be ridiculously high otherwise. Your larger pixel art is somewhat hard to follow at the moment, but it does look ok, and once you add some more depth ad colors, it'll probably be more visually understandable. At least to me. |