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BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Cshad - 06-26-2009 I feel like making my pokemon team in GSC style, so I started with Gallade. C+C so far ? The legs are really bugging me, but I can't make them longer because I need to keep the 56x56 limit. Should I just make the legs longer and say screw it to the limit? RE: BlahBlahBlah Gallade - Devicho - 06-26-2009 Aww I was planning to make my team in this style you jerk. >:< And to keep in in style, maybe make it look like he's jumping with his legs bent or something? Color choices seem a little weird to me, too, like you could probably hunt down a better palette. RE: BlahBlahBlah Gallade - Rökkan - 06-26-2009 and what about making the opposite? make the body smaller to fit in bigger legs? RE: BlahBlahBlah Gallade - Cshad - 06-27-2009 I appreciate the comments Devicho and Rokkan, I'll be sure to use that when I remake Gallade, because he looks fucking awful. I mean Jesus, this turned out wonderful (imo), compared to Gallade, he sucks >: Second member of my team, Gallade will be remade as well. C+C? RE: BlahBlahBlah Latias - JarJar - 06-27-2009 good because gallade is completely off and horrible, he doesnt even have blue on him or light green. 2nd one is alright, but it's stomach sticks out a bit too much on the lower left, push it in a lil by a pixel, the long black line under its arm(the front of the tummy) halfway at that line push the lower body 1 pixel to the right. lastly the lil spikes on its wing, bring the second two under the first up by a pixel or 2, those things dont extend that low. hope this helps, im an asshole when it comes to critting pokemon sprites, but they work wonders, good sprite though. RE: BlahBlahBlah Latias - Wavey - 06-27-2009 I'm so jealous, at least Cshad hurr can sprite Pokemon. :c I'm waiting for newGallade because Rokkan and Devicho gave good crits on it, I can't really search for more f RE: BlahBlahBlah Latias - Cshad - 06-27-2009 (06-27-2009, 01:39 AM)JarJar Wrote: 2nd one is alright, but it's stomach sticks out a bit too much on the lower left, push it in a lil by a pixel, the long black line under its arm(the front of the tummy) halfway at that line push the lower body 1 pixel to the right. This is the only thing I don't understand, I think I have fixed everything else though. @Wavey: You should get one msn, we have not talked in forever. RE: BlahBlahBlah Latias - JarJar - 06-27-2009 im saying to push in the stomach by 1 pixel, also theres a red pixel on the wing at the bottom that doesnt need to be there. RE: BlahBlahBlah Latias - Cshad - 06-27-2009 ? RE: BlahBlahBlah Latias - JarJar - 06-27-2009 hope its okay i edit, this is what i meant: http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/3434/latiass.gif stomach needed to be rounded more, and that dot on the wing needed to be gone. RE: BlahBlahBlah Latias - Cshad - 06-27-2009 Oh no, that's fine, it looks better. Here, I think I finally got it right; RE: BlahBlahBlah Latias - JarJar - 06-27-2009 just get rid of the black dot on the wing and its done RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Cshad - 06-27-2009 Ah, ok. New Swampert wip. Is anything wrong so far? A few things are bugging me, I think its the face, and the fact that I lack an orange shade, which makes Swampert, Swampert. I'll fish for an orange shade and see how it will turn out, but in the mean time C+C please? RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Boo - 06-27-2009 Not so much light reflecting on his face? RE: BlahBlahBlah Swampert WIP - Cshad - 06-27-2009 Better? I need to add the other hand still. |