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Platinum, Diamond, and Pearl - JarJar - 07-01-2009
![[Image: dpp.gif]](http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7725/dpp.gif)
Yes Platinum is Dawn's manga name.
Anyway I completed all 3, thanks to those who helped on Pearl. More comments would be nice before I submit these on art sites.
RE: Pearl/Barry/Rival whatever you wanna call him - Cheshire Mk-II - 07-01-2009
That is great, do you plan on making a Dia/Lucas to match?
RE: Pearl/Barry/Rival whatever you wanna call him - JarJar - 07-01-2009
Yes I do, I actually started him before pearl but I decided to finish pearl instead.
RE: Pearl/Barry/Rival whatever you wanna call him - Star - 07-01-2009
Looks amazing Jar, as usual. I always did like your styles, they're simple and clean. This one style is one of my favs.
Honestly, I don't think there is anything needed to be improved. I was gonna say his neck shouldn't be covered as much but since it looks like he is leaning forward a bit while walking, it's acceptable to have it covered.
RE: Pearl/Barry/Rival whatever you wanna call him - JarJar - 07-01-2009
Alright thanks, I guess I'll just move on and finish Diamond.
RE: Pearl/Barry/Rival whatever you wanna call him - JoshR691 - 07-01-2009
Looks pretty great, the only thing I see 'wrong' with him is his left cheek seems too chubby, but that might just be part of the Style...
RE: Pearl/Barry/Rival whatever you wanna call him - JarJar - 07-01-2009
edited because the dark spot i put there to prevent that wasnt dark enough
RE: Pearl/Barry/Rival whatever you wanna call him - JoshR691 - 07-01-2009
Looks better! Can't wait for Dia/Lucas
RE: Pearl/Barry/Rival whatever you wanna call him - JarJar - 07-02-2009
![[Image: dpp.gif]](http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/7725/dpp.gif)
added lucas, edited dawn and barry too.
RE: Platinum, Diamond, and Pearl - Cheshire Mk-II - 07-02-2009
Looks great, nice work.
RE: Platinum, Diamond, and Pearl - JoshR691 - 07-02-2009
I can't quite put my finger on it, but I think Lucas' Left arm (Our Right) is positioned a little awkwardly... Maybe try to angle it forward a little more...
Other than that, they're great!
RE: Platinum, Diamond, and Pearl - JarJar - 07-02-2009
I had a strong feeling the arm was off because it was bothering me a bit still, but then I took a good long look at the artwork and figured a solution:
![[Image: dppz.gif]](http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/1548/dppz.gif)
RE: Platinum, Diamond, and Pearl - Badassbill - 07-02-2009
![[Image: 1245985597293.jpg]](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v410/badassbill123/1245985597293.jpg)
Seriously though these are really nice.
RE: Platinum, Diamond, and Pearl - GrooveMan.exe - 07-02-2009
Those eyes are really creepy, especially Pearl's.
I wouldn't expect them to all have the same eye-shape, either.
RE: Platinum, Diamond, and Pearl - JarJar - 07-02-2009
edited their eyes, and the shape of each is slightly different to match each one's expression better, and added more color and shading in them.
anything else or am i done?