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Super Marty-o Twins - MrYoshbert - 08-27-2009

Started this a while ago:

[Image: 2wqejci.png]

I would like some C+C before I get further with these.
Also, unrelated Bowser Jr is unrelated.

RE: Super Marty-o Twins - Toad - 08-28-2009

(08-27-2009, 10:24 PM)Mr.Y Wrote: Started this a while ago:

[Image: 2wqejci.png]

I would like some C+C before I get further with these.
Also, unrelated Bowser Jr is unrelated.
Moreo's body and his left hand are too fat. Also the black outlines should only be around the sprites, not inside them. Change the black lines inside the sprites to darker colors. The shading needs more contrast. I like the lineart though. When they're facing forward, either their hat or their face gets taller. Change that so it does not.