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M&L3 Marylin/Beldam (shadow sirens) - Baegal - 09-17-2009
inspired by ridge's vivian because I liked it so much. I might do Beldam later. C+C Please~
![[Image: Marylintsr.png]](http://i586.photobucket.com/albums/ss301/Baegal/Marylintsr.png)
RE: M&L3 Marylin (shadow sisters) - Tero - 09-18-2009
Looks pretty good.
RE: M&L3 Marylin (shadow sisters) - Sengir - 09-18-2009
Belly shading is too angular, but the rest is pretty awesome.
RE: M&L3 Marylin (shadow sisters) - Boo - 09-18-2009
Wow, looks pretty good, nice job. Can't wait to see Beldam if you decide to do her.
RE: M&L3 Marylin (shadow sisters) - Baegal - 09-18-2009
thanks, I'll try to do Beldam in my spare time, she seems harder.
RE: M&L3 Marylin (shadow sisters) - Azure-Tranquility - 09-18-2009
Something about the shading bugs me...
But the lineart is alright.
RE: M&L3 Marylin (shadow sisters) - Baegal - 09-18-2009
I fixed Marylin up a bit, but im still not sure whether she should have the cheeks or not. Beldam was hard, i need c+c on her.
![[Image: Beldam.png]](http://i586.photobucket.com/albums/ss301/Baegal/Beldam.png)
RE: M&L3 Marylin (shadow sisters) - Baegal - 09-19-2009
i changed beldam a little more, because i saw a few errors.
![[Image: Beldam-1.png]](http://i586.photobucket.com/albums/ss301/Baegal/Beldam-1.png)
c+c por favor~
RE: M&L3 Marylin/Beldam (shadow sirens) - Azure-Tranquility - 09-19-2009
I say yes to adding the cheeks.
RE: M&L3 Marylin/Beldam (shadow sirens) - Baegal - 09-19-2009
i thought so
do you see a problem with beldam?
RE: M&L3 Marylin/Beldam (shadow sirens) - Mallacxo - 09-20-2009
It looks like she has two big eyes, but I know this is her hair, but it just looks like it.
RE: M&L3 Marylin/Beldam (shadow sirens) - Shouty - 09-20-2009
Nose needs to be pointier. Make the width of the entire sprite an odd number of pixels. Right now, it's just kind of flat and square.
RE: M&L3 Marylin/Beldam (shadow sirens) - Baegal - 09-20-2009
Better?
![[Image: Beldam-2.png]](http://i586.photobucket.com/albums/ss301/Baegal/Beldam-2.png)
RE: M&L3 Marylin/Beldam (shadow sirens) - Shouty - 09-20-2009
Yes, much better. Now for the hat: the brim is pillow-shaded. The brim of the hat sort of curves out from the point. That curviness needs to be suggested more in the front, and in the back, it should just recede out. Give it depth.
RE: M&L3 Marylin/Beldam (shadow sirens) - Baegal - 09-20-2009
not 100% sure what you meant, but I think this is better
![[Image: Beldam-4.png]](http://i586.photobucket.com/albums/ss301/Baegal/Beldam-4.png)