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Zaldia - Zaldia - 11-19-2009 I'm new here...I would have posted in the "Hello" topic but I was having some trouble finding it. I have recently been working on this sprite which I started from scratch with a reference picture that I've always thought was really cool. I'm just stuck on a few parts and need a little boost of advice and comments to get me going again. I call her Zaldia. By the way...I am Zeblid's student. I'm not new to spriting that much either...well okay I'm only 3 months old. Anyway, comments and critizism would be lovely. RE: Zaldia - A.J. Nitro - 11-19-2009 It looks pretty good, but my old recommendation would be to fix the hair. They look too thick. And welcome! RE: Zaldia - Cobalt Blue - 11-19-2009 don't use a resized image as a reference. use the original and drom that take the elements that you think should be implemented. also, her propotions seems to be a bit odd, since her hips are huge but her torso is extremely small(even when the character is portrayed from a sligthy lower point of view). RE: Zaldia - Dave - 11-20-2009 I like the way you do it, and nice shading too.You seem to be missing the wings on the head but I'm sure you already knew that. RE: Zaldia - Neslug - 11-21-2009 Shading looks too strong to me and the top part of the body, including head, seem to be out of proportion. RE: Zaldia - Zaldia - 11-21-2009 @AJ- Yeah thats a good idea. I've had a hard time with that hair but perhaps I can figure something out. Thank you =P @DT- Why is it a bad idea to use a resized image of the origional? I can still see everything perfectly and I also have the origional in my saved files. Also...She's wearing a pofy skirt...you really can't see her hips o-o. @Alcala- Thank you very much. Yeah I have that and the lantern which I will work on and then update this thread when I'm finished. RE: Zaldia - Ton - 11-21-2009 Her waist and bust look a bit to thin compared to the reference. RE: Zaldia - Cobalt Blue - 11-21-2009 the way you're doing the hair looks as if she was using dreadlocks. a resized image(again) erarses way too many details that are vanished and/or distorted. thats why. |