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Another stuff - Kaolla Su - 06-23-2008
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RE: Another stuff - Gors - 06-23-2008
Hmm... not bad... could use a little work, though.
The first sheet: You should use more contrast and shade more. Also, make use of anti-aliasing, as in the original sprite. Also, use less space in the sheet: the smaller and organized, the better.
The pixelart: This one is actually nice: You could shade its outline, too. There are some pillowshaded parts (clothes) and some parts are messy (hands, ribbon). Her wings are mirrored, too.
MLSSS style sheet: This one is kinda bad; sorry if I'm being rude. The MLSSS style doesn't allow you to have black outline inside the sprite, I think... and this style makes intense use of motion blur (check Mario's attack for reference). The anatomy is weird and you need to use more gray pixels outside the sprite (anti-aliasing). The character's items need severe shading and anti-aliasing; right now, they look like MS-Paint tool-made sprites. And your color choice is bad; use an official palette; find it at www.spriters-resource.com, resources, tutorials.
RE: Another stuff - Maxpphire - 07-08-2008
It isn't bad at all but I can tell your a Love Hina fan.
Listen to gorsal. He said everything that need to be said.
RE: Another stuff - TPoe - 07-08-2008
That doesn't look like m&l:ss
RE: Another stuff - Ton - 07-08-2008
Not a bad start. I can see you need work on shading and saturation. Keep at it. I see lots of potential.