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Shroomz
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Ok so i haven't done a custom in over a year.
Just thought i'd have a quick go and if i get some posative comments i might get back into it.

i would just like some C+C please :>
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Needs more contrast :<
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Needs contrast like Ob2ko said but otherwise Heart333
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Any better?
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You only dithered it :<

Change the palette so that the shades can be seen more easily.

This is pretty awesome either way :>
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oB2Ko Mario Wrote:Needs more contrast :<

Sonikku Wrote:Needs contrast like Ob2ko said but otherwise Heart333

i h8 u guys stealing my phrase >Sad

but yse

What these guys said is what this image NEEDS.
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Ok sorry i got contrast and dithering mixed up having been off the sprite scene for a year :p

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These any better?
Not the worlds best pallet.
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you made it dirtier BigG XD

go back to your previous version, and add contrast to the shading, and make the AA more in the coners then it would look cleaner! Also Nice job! =D
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YES

Much better~

And don't put so many shades on the center white spot on the mushroom's cap. It shouldn't look like a bulge.
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Ok well thanks everyone for the tips.
Hopefully i can get back into spriting Smile

Btw CYoshi i purposly left the cleaner one with it to see peoples opinions.
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looks nice!
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BigG Wrote:[Image: 1znq3if.png]

Any better?
New one = barf.
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