Pikmin

[Koreo the Fox]

While I do Pokemon, I decided I would also do Pikmin. As you can tell from my username, I like pikmin...

Here they are!



I think these are way better than the Pokemon I made.

Problems I think I have:

Red Pikmin:The nose looks out of place.
Yellow Pikmin:The ear looks wrong.
Blue Pikmin:I think it is good.
Purple Pikmin:The shading looks out of place.
White Pikmin:The shape...

[Dave]

.......I don't see anything....
Try using photobucket, and try an attachment, maby it will work.

[Solink]

.......I don't see anything....
Tr yusing photobucket, and try an attachment, maby it will work.

he forgot the / in the tag

they should be less fat(exepted the purple one)
right now they remind me of teletubies

[Dave]

.....no offense but they are really bad, there is no shadin and no consept of any Pikming I have ever seen, and they'r bodies are really...bad.
That's the nicest way I can put in.

[Koreo the Fox]

Skinnier!

Still don't like the white one though...

[Dave]

You don't understand, you need to make them looks like the real game Pikimins.

[Koreo the Fox]

The onion.

I know it's bad, i'm still working on it.

[Cobalt Blue]

finish one thing, and then move on the next. otherwise you'll just stack a bunch of poorly done sprites.

[Koreo the Fox]

Actually, I was making it altogether, for the Red Pikmin.

Here is the work I did so far:





If you can’t tell the difference of the Pikmin, I made the legs skinnier and rearranged them, I also changed the body of the White Pikmin, and I didn’t change anything at all on the Purple Pikmin.

[Gollum]

Line art is way to blocky and jagged, shading(?) needs much work, and the curves don't curve.
The leaf stem is much to stiff, the onion is ugly, though the pattern on it's hull isn't to bad.
The pellets are just... Yuck.
The fire spout is also very yuck.

[Koreo the Fox]

Look any better?

Differences:

All:The stem
Red, Blue, Yellow, and White: There heads are wider
Red: The nose is a pixel longer
Yellow: Redid the ear
Purple: I redid and moved the leg
Blue: Changed the color of the gill

Edit:
Olimar:


I made the big one quite a while ago

[Koreo the Fox]

Differences:

All: Stem, Leaf
Red, Blue, Yellow, and White: The neck
Yellow: The Ear
Blue: The gill
Purple: Compleatly redid it

[Alpha Six]

Stop doing new sprites until you fix your current ones. They're all blocky and ugly and have poor shading.

[Koreo the Fox]

Stop doing new sprites until you fix your current ones. They're all blocky and ugly and have poor shading.

What are you talking about? I started Pikmin and I'm still working on pikmin.

[Chaoxys]

Stop doing new sprites until you fix your current ones. They're all blocky and ugly and have poor shading.

What are you talking about? I started Pikmin and I'm still working on pikmin.

Pikmin (the game) is your theme, however, you started with Pikmin (creature), then went onto onions, then to Olimar. Go back and fix the Pikmn before you go on, otherwise you won't learn and you'll continue to make the same mistakes.