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A.J. Nitro Wrote:Not bad, but a few things:
-The shadow shouldn't stretch. Normally they stay the same in one spot.
-Also, maybe make the arms sway to the left and the right. That's exactly what I was worrying about, and about the arms, he only moves them to the left for some weird reason, I guess that's how Sumo Bro's walk.
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In his walk,
it looks more like he's sliding than running and his right hand (our left) looks really weird
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07-29-2008, 10:07 AM
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Ok I made it so his arms move back and fourth, Sorry if the shadow stretches I will fix that later, and about the aniamtion being fast I will fix that too,
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Now he looks like he's dancing. . . . . O_o"
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07-29-2008, 11:13 AM
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Parakoopa Wrote:Now he looks like he's dancing. . . . . O_o" The animation is too fast, but he is walking, but the shadow is off. And I DON'T know WTF happened with the feet?
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I think they look better the other way around... The Walk animation looks better as an Idle, and the Idle looks better as a Walk.
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Ok I fixed the speed of the animation, and I made the walking better
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With the walking, his legs could use some work.
The arms are great, however.
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07-29-2008, 09:45 PM
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pikspiksmaroator Wrote:With the walking, his legs could use some work.
The arms are great, however. I think it is good with the extension, and when I tried shortening it, he looked like he was limping instead of walking, so next is the fighting, Sumo Bro's stomp on blocks sending a lightning Bolt to the ground that spits up Fire! Or they can cause a semi-earthquake, or fissure.
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Or both. Yeah, that'll be good!
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Ok I decided as I'm finishing my Sumo Bro, I would do Ghost Piranha from YIDS in M&L style, so C+C please
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You quit on Sumo Bro?
anyways, Make the tail a little smaller and the mouth and wings a little bigger on ghost Piranha. Other than that, I see no probalem with it.
Still thinking of a new name.
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(08-04-2008, 02:36 PM)Shroob2 Wrote: You quit on Sumo Bro?
anyways, Make the tail a little smaller and the mouth and wings a little bigger on ghost Piranha. Other than that, I see no probalem with it. Of course I'm not quitting on Sumo Bro! He is a WIP, I decided to start on the Ghost Piranha, and I'm not making the tail smaller because it has to be able to move back and fourth, but yes I did make the lips bigger, and I did some extra touches on the shading to make it better,
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I love that Gost Piranha.
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