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#31
A.J. Nitro Wrote:Not bad, but a few things:
-The shadow shouldn't stretch. Normally they stay the same in one spot.
-Also, maybe make the arms sway to the left and the right.
That's exactly what I was worrying about, and about the arms, he only moves them to the left for some weird reason, I guess that's how Sumo Bro's walk.
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#32
In his walk,

it looks more like he's sliding than running and his right hand (our left) looks really weird
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#33
Ok I made it so his arms move back and fourth, Sorry if the shadow stretches I will fix that later, and about the aniamtion being fast I will fix that too,

Idle
[Image: sumobro1fu4.gif]
Walking
[Image: sumobro2ty0.gif]
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Now he looks like he's dancing. . . . . O_o"
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Parakoopa Wrote:Now he looks like he's dancing. . . . . O_o"
The animation is too fast, but he is walking, but the shadow is off. And I DON'T know WTF happened with the feet?
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#36
I think they look better the other way around... The Walk animation looks better as an Idle, and the Idle looks better as a Walk.
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Ok I fixed the speed of the animation, and I made the walking better
[Image: wip3po7.png]
Idle
[Image: sumobro1ac3.gif]
Walking
[Image: sumobro2lw8.gif]
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#38
Much better!
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#39
With the walking, his legs could use some work.

The arms are great, however.

[Image: 2014-11-19_1823.png]
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pikspiksmaroator Wrote:With the walking, his legs could use some work.

The arms are great, however.
I think it is good with the extension, and when I tried shortening it, he looked like he was limping instead of walking, so next is the fighting, Sumo Bro's stomp on blocks sending a lightning Bolt to the ground that spits up Fire! Or they can cause a semi-earthquake, or fissure.
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Or both. Yeah, that'll be good!
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Ok I decided as I'm finishing my Sumo Bro, I would do Ghost Piranha from YIDS in M&L style, so C+C please
[Image: ghostpirahnaty2.png]
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#43
You quit on Sumo Bro?

anyways, Make the tail a little smaller and the mouth and wings a little bigger on ghost Piranha. Other than that, I see no probalem with it.
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(08-04-2008, 02:36 PM)Shroob2 Wrote: You quit on Sumo Bro?

anyways, Make the tail a little smaller and the mouth and wings a little bigger on ghost Piranha. Other than that, I see no probalem with it.
Of course I'm not quitting on Sumo Bro! He is a WIP, I decided to start on the Ghost Piranha, and I'm not making the tail smaller because it has to be able to move back and fourth, but yes I did make the lips bigger, and I did some extra touches on the shading to make it better,
[Image: ghostpirahnapm4.png]
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I love that Gost Piranha.
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