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02-04-2010, 11:12 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-14-2010, 08:06 PM by Cytric Acid.)
fff new sprite thread with a parody of do ya as a title :B
I find the pokemon spriting style so annoying but so pleasing.
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I think I made him too big, and I think the fire sucks. The eyes don't look very pokemon-y either...
I didn't use any references on this which explains how it's so un-pokemon like.
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holy shit that actually looks good
i mean based on the title my expectations couldn't have been lower so odds are it isn't quite as good as it looks to me right now but
wow
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Pretty mch what tuna said
try moving his larger eye farther away from his other eye more, his face seems scrunched
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yeah eyes are a bit messed up, one pupil looks larger than the other, and the positions are uneven
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yeah, it's definitely too big for something that's going to have two evolutions. also I've noticed shading in Pokemon sprites uses dithering, so you could look into adding a bit of that.
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While it's not perfect, you've really improved since the sprite in your avatar
good job
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02-05-2010, 03:10 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-05-2010, 03:10 PM by Cytric Acid.)
Ah, thank you guys. I fixed most of the problems I guess, but i'm not sure about the eye. It's a habit that I hate, but I don't know if it really looks right. I tried shrinking the left eye but it didn't look good.
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Man I was so expecting Franken-pokemon made by slapping pieces of other pokemon together.
Good work so far.
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02-05-2010, 03:18 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-05-2010, 03:19 PM by Rosencrantz.)
oh hey I remember you
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yeah the eyes seem out of perspective to me
not really sure how you would fix it, though :L
it just feels like the head is aiming left but the eyes are positioned as if it's facing us a bit more.
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02-05-2010, 03:21 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-05-2010, 03:37 PM by Cytric Acid.)
I'm sorry i blame school haha ;A;
I totally agree with the eye. I always make the father away eye taller than the closer one, which i hate about my style heh
edit: oh okay, i can fix that
edit edit: fixed
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they're still a bit misaligned; the head is slightly tilting upward where the eyes slant downward. move the left (our left) eye up.
I also feel like the gem on its head could be centered a bit more, it seems too far to the right. try placing it directly between the eyes.
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Alright, i hopefully fixed all the problems with my sprite.
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haha, looks awesome. You have a nice grasp of the style (It's impossible for me), although the eyes look more anime-ish than pokemon-ish
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New pixel art!!
It's a new avatar. I'm pretty happy with it right now, but i can see it needs some work.
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That looks great, I'd add more contrast if it were my sprite but it looks fine, apart from a few jaggy lines.
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