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#1
05-30-2010, 12:11 PM (This post was last modified: 05-30-2010, 12:28 PM by Chris2Balls [:B].)
I fused my two characters:
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This is an edited splice, each bit taken from one of my sprites though (resized, erased and kept outline and reshaded etc).
What do you think? Anything you like/ don't like design-wise? Edits would be deeply appreciated Smile
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05-30-2010, 12:13 PM
Hip, but Id like more contrast.
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05-30-2010, 12:35 PM
The dithering on the pants looks wierd.
And what's up with his arms ?
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05-30-2010, 03:14 PM
Dithering's to convey textile and introduces a gradient in the trousers, did some dithering on the jacket for the former purpose, but not on the shoulders for readability. I made the contrast a bit higher (not much), but I wanted to keep a distance between the black and the shading.
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He's supposed to be keeping one hand against his left headphone, and the black thing's his dense arm hair.
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05-30-2010, 03:21 PM
Oh, ok.
You might wanna redo that gradient, it doesn't add up.
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05-30-2010, 04:01 PM
these arms need a serious increase of mass and volume. unless they're suposed to be made of sticks.

also the neck looks extremely flat.
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05-30-2010, 04:15 PM (This post was last modified: 05-30-2010, 04:16 PM by Chris2Balls [:B].)
I basically wanted the dithered colour on one leg and the pink on another. I changed the dithering a tiny bit, if you could tell me what is precisely wrong I'll try work on it. I've added a portrait I'll shade next weekend:
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Okay Tyvon, I'll see what I can do about them.
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05-30-2010, 04:23 PM
fuck i said i'm not tyvon wearing a wig

the dithering makes the pants look as if they were made up of fishnet

you might as well use a solid colors based gradient-
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05-30-2010, 04:43 PM
[Image: c2bed.png]
Any better?
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05-30-2010, 04:48 PM
(05-30-2010, 04:43 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote: [Image: c2bed.png]
Any better?

Oh baby that's so sexy
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05-30-2010, 05:17 PM
Keep the texture gradient on the jacket, but It also looks like you have a small amount of banding on the neck.
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05-30-2010, 05:59 PM (This post was last modified: 05-30-2010, 06:00 PM by Chris2Balls [:B].)
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Better? Or were you thinking of his adam's apple?
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05-30-2010, 06:02 PM
i dont believe it needs all that amount of anti aliasing at all on his body.

the pants looks way more defined than the torso for the same reason.
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05-30-2010, 06:18 PM (This post was last modified: 05-30-2010, 06:18 PM by Chris2Balls [:B].)
[Image: c2bed.png]
I reduced the AA, I tried without and didn't like it.
EDIT: ugh, it looks jaggy but its late so i'm calling it a day. Feel free to edit it.
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05-30-2010, 06:32 PM
(05-30-2010, 05:59 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote: [Image: c2bed.png]
Better? Or were you thinking of his adam's apple?
Adam's apple, area around middle of the neck.
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