More or less finished

[Cobalt Blue]

Chris2Bones

[Gors]

that third one is strange

and I like it

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

My opinion's split too, I'll try find something between.
Anyway I got a WIP up for the PJ challenge:

I was wondering if I should give him a football uniform, maybe a ball?

[Mabelma]

That looks really nice C2B, I'm liking it so far. As for the kid, I think he might be too tall. Seeing as you said he was age 8-11 to me he looks to tall but maybe it's because I haven't seen any other character that will be in the comic, maybe he you have another character you could to a height comparison and we see how he compares in height with the other characters.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I'll twiddle with the proportions, thanks for mentioning it.
Update:

[Mabelma]

For some reason the leg pose on the other one looked a little better than on the new one. A football uniform would be really cool but I don't know where you could place the ball maybe on his hand or something? Don't mention it, I'm glad I could help.

[Gors]

the black selout kills it for me

also background looks similar to the sprite's color so it hurts readability too


but it's a wip soo

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

?

[Mabelma]

It's looking nice but I still think that the leg pose o the first one was a tad better also it may be that you still haven't gotten there but if you did, I suggest you keep the black outline consistent, especially on the hands also, you possibly enlarge the image upwards so the horns/hair don't get cut off that much.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I can't change the canvas size according to the rules :I

[Cobalt Blue]

the torso and the legs doesnt match :V

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I know :/
Is that an important issue? Does it just make it look weird? Mh. It's true they don't look like they'd stand his weight. I'll fix it soon.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

BUMPIN BITCHES

ive been listening to too much mstrkrft

[Gold]

Metaru??

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Face looks pretty sweet but I'm not sure wt's goign on witht hte hoodie.

[2+D]

The neck part is kinda messed up