A Song I Wrote <3

[Nitro]

When A Breeze Of Wind
Comes Down In Your Face
You Get A Bit Of The Very Dry Taste

When The Ground Twists And Turns
Growls And Burns
You Can See The Evil Smirk

When The Water Makes A Splash
And Whips To Your Face
You Feel So Hasty No Time To Waste

When The Moon Does A Sparkle
A Twinkle And A Blush
It Lights Up Your Eyes Like A Butter-Fly

When The Sun Shines Your Eyes
Its Beauty And Its Heat
Lights Up Your Head To Your Feet

A Rose Has A Thorn
Breaks Your Heart
But Lifes Been Good
Its Time To Depart


I Wrote It A Few Days Ago, Like It?

[Darklink]

It's a bit emo. Right now it's in poem form. Without instrumentals etc. a song is a poem. Just so you know that.

[Spy]

It's a bit emo.

ohoho owned

but i like it i had to pee with every paragraph so i cant seem to read it all at once

[mors ontologica]

It's not bad, but why does Every Word Have A Capitol?
Capitols are for the beginning of sentences and nouns.
Other than that yeah not bad.