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I do too, and i agree with Hoeloe about the sword, i think the chest problem can be fixed if a new position on the sword is made.
Also, doesnt the cahracter wear some sandals?
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Jack's feet and sandals aren't seen until he runs, jumps (good), or his robe is damaged and torn from battle.
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the magic sword's still bending
swords tend to be a straight line from hilt to blade
give or take a *very* slight curve
and usually the curve is consistent with the rest of the sword
but you're not doing that :C
that said, the hands are easily my favorite bit of the piece, considering how hard they are to draw
also heh I just noticed the quotes in the reply titles
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try changing Jack's eyes so he doesn't look cross-eyed too
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I still dont like the chest, make it fit with the body
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I wish the GBA game's sprites were as good as this.
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I like how professor utonium is nearly identical to jack
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Something bugs me about his face. I think it's the line of shadow next to his mouth, it makes his face look both fat and old.
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the pupils look huge and cross-eyed. But over all it looks pretty sweet!
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09-30-2010, 05:40 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-30-2010, 06:05 PM by DioShiba.)
(09-30-2010, 07:14 AM)Pugnificent Wrote: I like how professor utonium is nearly identical to jack
I actually thought they were the same character when the premise of the show came out.
the sprites are looking great so far P.Kirb, I don't have a peep about ether of them
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The belt thingy looks out of place.
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nnnnnghgkgh it's not easy getting this katana at the right anglllle..
also I'm not sure how approach the glare on this space helmet, I'm pretty much done with this except for that part
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