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I do too, and i agree with Hoeloe about the sword, i think the chest problem can be fixed if a new position on the sword is made.
Also, doesnt the cahracter wear some sandals?
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Jack's feet and sandals aren't seen until he runs, jumps (good), or his robe is damaged and torn from battle.
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the magic sword's still bending
swords tend to be a straight line from hilt to blade
give or take a *very* slight curve
and usually the curve is consistent with the rest of the sword
but you're not doing that :C
that said, the hands are easily my favorite bit of the piece, considering how hard they are to draw
also heh I just noticed the quotes in the reply titles
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try changing Jack's eyes so he doesn't look cross-eyed too
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I still dont like the chest, make it fit with the body
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I wish the GBA game's sprites were as good as this.
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I like how professor utonium is nearly identical to jack
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Something bugs me about his face. I think it's the line of shadow next to his mouth, it makes his face look both fat and old.
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the pupils look huge and cross-eyed. But over all it looks pretty sweet!
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09-30-2010, 05:40 PM
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(09-30-2010, 07:14 AM)Pugnificent Wrote: I like how professor utonium is nearly identical to jack
I actually thought they were the same character when the premise of the show came out.
the sprites are looking great so far P.Kirb, I don't have a peep about ether of them
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The belt thingy looks out of place.
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nnnnnghgkgh it's not easy getting this katana at the right anglllle..
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also I'm not sure how approach the glare on this space helmet, I'm pretty much done with this except for that part
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