Pokemon Pink

[Lucas Olivarde]

I have Geodude done! =]
C&C pleaseee.

[Lucas Olivarde]

Edit: Here's Graveler

[Hoeloe]

Edit post exists for a reason.

About the sprites, geodude looks pretty good, apart from the flat lower lip, maybe round that off a bit.
Graveller is not nearly as good, his face is too far worwards, 2 of his hands are weirdly shaped, and he's not really looking in the right direction.

[Ghost Kirby]

In my opinion Geodude looks great, nice pose. Graveller on the other hand looks good, just not the Geodude standard. If you sorted his fingers out a bit on his raised hand it's look a lot better.

So far, so good. Keep it up.

[JoshR691]

Geodude looks excellent, Graveler does too, but it looks like his left arm(our right) isn't attached

[Hoeloe]

I just realised what bothers me about geodude. He has a HUGE lower lip, fix that and it's totally solid.

[Ghost Kirby]

Agreed Hoeloe and the mouth itself seems quite big aswell, but if you are aiming for him to look like he's grinding his teeth together then it looks good to me

[Hoeloe]

I like the manga design. But she does need something on her head. How about something simple, like a bow?

Also, Electabuzz looks awesome.

EDIT: Had a go at Pink overworld.

   

Just posting this because it seemed to slip under the radar at the end of the last page...

[Lucas Olivarde]

Attempted to fix Geodudes lip, and not really sure what to do with Graveler... =\\
Edit: Who thinks I should do Golem..? I'm not really sure if I want to.. =[

[Hoeloe]

Just flipping Graveller round won't do it. Bring his face inwards and thicken up the lower arm of the top left (our top left).

[S-Cpu]

I got bored so i made a missingno (the legendary #0 (pokedex))

[X Gamer 66]

I'd make the top of Geodude's head more rocky, and reduce the shading on that area a bit.

Graveler's large forearms (mostly our left) look odd (the small arms look great though). Also, I'd make the lineart of Graveler's back more rocky in appearence. But I think his face is fine as is.

Both are excellencent otherwise though. Also, while you obviously don't need to do Golem, I could bear naught but appreciation should you decide to try him out. But if you don't want to, that'd perfectly fine.


Pink's overworld is looking quite dandy as well. I may try making a couple different trainer sprites for her later, for design ideas, one of which I'll be sure to base off your overworld.


MissingNo looks much too small, and its eyes/mouth are too big and far apart. Looks cool otherwise. But I think Yellow used the same ghost sprite as R/B, so I think Pink ought to retain the sprite as well.

[Lucas Olivarde]

I made Nidoran Male, I'll post him in a sec.
Edit:
Edit 2: Hoeloe, I know, I was just turning him the direction he'd face in the game.

[S-Cpu]

may i reserve venusaur?

[X Gamer 66]

The side of Nidoran's ear needs to be spikier, the spikes on its back should be bigger, and the eyes should be looking toward the opponent. Looks cool otherwise though.

may i reserve venusaur?

Sure.

Also, I just did a trainer sprite based off Holoe's overworld for now:

(from left to right: bow + flower, just bow, just flower)

I couldn't tell what the things in her hair were supposed to be so I just went with a flower/bow. Mind everyone this is still just a concept and may not be the final design, I may make more ideas later or something.