08-13-2015, 01:01 PM
drawn nasty sstuff
[DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0
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08-13-2015, 01:01 PM
drawn nasty sstuff
Thanked by: psychospacecow, Garamonde
My ref character Spero and another created character that I haven't named yet. Crit?
Thanked by: psychospacecow, recme
Sorry for the double post guys but I just sat down to do a random doodle and this happened
I have no idea how I drew her...... Thanked by: Garamonde, psychospacecow
08-14-2015, 10:48 PM
That's pretty good. The eye closest to us is a bit too far toward our side though.
08-14-2015, 10:59 PM
My lacking skills of background drawing seek again. Thanked by: Filler
08-14-2015, 11:25 PM
@BlueBlur97
The right eye has an fish/horse eye issue where the eyes are placed on the sides of the face, rather than the front. Fix that, and I'd say it's good. Thanked by: ~Axis~
08-15-2015, 08:20 AM
I drew a thing.
08-15-2015, 09:20 AM
Close, but the eye closest to us should be closer to the center, it is too far on the side of her face right now. Here's a very rough edit:
Thanked by: ~Axis~
Thanked by: psychospacecow
08-15-2015, 03:03 PM
I'm not sure what her right leg (to our left) is supposed to be doing. The angle is awkward and very unclear.
08-15-2015, 05:18 PM
It's probably because of the fact that her thigh there is really bulbous, and the outlines of it intersect into the leg in front of it and the hand. This leaves no negative space and makes it more difficult to read. I would make the outer thigh less rounded and maybe see if you couldn't make her hold it out a bit more so there is a bit of negative space between it and the other body parts.
(Sorry if that doesn't make sense) Thanked by: ~Axis~
08-15-2015, 08:29 PM
Also (08-15-2015, 09:20 AM)Mighty Jetters Wrote: Close, but the eye closest to us should be closer to the center, it is too far on the side of her face right now. Here's a very rough edit: Eeeeh, I feel you put it too close. The face is not a flat frontal print, in certain angles the eyes will be further away from the nose. |
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