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[DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0
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#526
08-13-2015, 01:01 PM
drawn nasty sstuff

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08-13-2015, 03:04 PM
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08-13-2015, 04:45 PM (This post was last modified: 08-13-2015, 06:28 PM by ~Axis~.)
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My ref character Spero and another created character that I haven't named yet. Crit?

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08-14-2015, 10:32 PM (This post was last modified: 08-14-2015, 10:35 PM by ~Axis~.)
Sorry for the double post guys but I just sat down to do a random doodle and this happened

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I have no idea how I drew her......
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#530
08-14-2015, 10:48 PM
That's pretty good. The eye closest to us is a bit too far toward our side though.
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08-14-2015, 10:59 PM
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My lacking skills of background drawing seek again.
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08-14-2015, 11:06 PM (This post was last modified: 08-14-2015, 11:06 PM by ~Axis~.)
Is this better? I moved the furthest eye a bit closer and completed the drawing.

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#533
08-14-2015, 11:25 PM
@BlueBlur97

The right eye has an fish/horse eye issue where the eyes are placed on the sides of the face, rather than the front.

Fix that, and I'd say it's good.
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08-15-2015, 08:20 AM
I drew a thing.

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#535
08-15-2015, 09:20 AM
Close, but the eye closest to us should be closer to the center, it is too far on the side of her face right now. Here's a very rough edit:

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08-15-2015, 01:18 PM (This post was last modified: 08-15-2015, 01:20 PM by ~Axis~.)
Thanks for the advice Mighty!

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08-15-2015, 03:03 PM
I'm not sure what her right leg (to our left) is supposed to be doing. The angle is awkward and very unclear.
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08-15-2015, 03:57 PM (This post was last modified: 08-15-2015, 04:00 PM by ~Axis~.)
(08-15-2015, 03:03 PM)Virt Wrote: I'm not sure what her right leg (to our left) is supposed to be doing. The angle is awkward and very unclear.

It is supposed to be bent.

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#539
08-15-2015, 05:18 PM
It's probably because of the fact that her thigh there is really bulbous, and the outlines of it intersect into the leg in front of it and the hand. This leaves no negative space and makes it more difficult to read. I would make the outer thigh less rounded and maybe see if you couldn't make her hold it out a bit more so there is a bit of negative space between it and the other body parts.

(Sorry if that doesn't make sense)
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08-15-2015, 08:29 PM
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(08-15-2015, 09:20 AM)Mighty Jetters Wrote: Close, but the eye closest to us should be closer to the center, it is too far on the side of her face right now. Here's a very rough edit:

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Eeeeh, I feel you put it too close. The face is not a flat frontal print, in certain angles the eyes will be further away from the nose.

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