Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs
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Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs
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06-24-2008, 06:17 AM
So, uh, your description sucks, you never really define the characters, the setting, the time frame, what's going on, why they're fighting, or any reasoning for what you're doing. The 'chapter' was too short, and your style of writing us much like applying a cheese grater to your eyeballs.
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Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs - by Hayzer the Tazer - 06-23-2008, 05:31 PM
RE: Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs - by Zee - 06-24-2008, 06:17 AM
RE: Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs - by Hayzer the Tazer - 06-24-2008, 10:51 AM
RE: Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs - by GrooveMan.exe - 06-24-2008, 11:12 AM
RE: Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs - by Hayzer the Tazer - 06-24-2008, 12:40 PM
RE: Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs - by mors ontologica - 06-30-2008, 07:23 AM
RE: Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs - by Hayzer the Tazer - 06-30-2008, 11:55 AM
RE: Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs - by Corporal Tom - 06-30-2008, 11:57 AM
RE: Hydrodynamics and Pyromaniacs - by Zee - 06-30-2008, 12:09 PM
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