05-23-2009, 10:19 AM
Yes it is another edit, lets not have this argument again. It's a matter of helping razor get better.
What bothers me is that while he's standing the white portions of his hand have a black outline, yet the other portions of his white colored for his spines and such are not given the outline. And when he runs that black outline dissapears from the hands. I suggest a bit more consistency.
Don't take this the wrong way, but if you're aiming to improve your spriting abilities, do customs. They won't look as good and will have a lot of flaws, but then we can really help you out in the way of pointing out where your flaws are and then you can work on them. You can keep going edits, however heavy they may be, but working on your weak areas can really help you improve overall.
What bothers me is that while he's standing the white portions of his hand have a black outline, yet the other portions of his white colored for his spines and such are not given the outline. And when he runs that black outline dissapears from the hands. I suggest a bit more consistency.
Don't take this the wrong way, but if you're aiming to improve your spriting abilities, do customs. They won't look as good and will have a lot of flaws, but then we can really help you out in the way of pointing out where your flaws are and then you can work on them. You can keep going edits, however heavy they may be, but working on your weak areas can really help you improve overall.