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it surely could use a bit more saturation, unless you're aiming for a specific "ambient" with those dark tiles.

This world is suppose to be dark and gloomy, but thanks for the critic.

The lineart looks a bit jagged.

Mkay, Thanks for the critc and I fixed the jaggy-ness, I think.

That looks really really flat, like a cheap school play's stage prop.

Well, I kind of want it to be flat like a school play's stage prop but I don't want it to be cheap and super flat.
Thanks for the critic also..!



And also, I fixed it and added a tree to it.
The tree shape is suppose to be square.