07-01-2008, 04:13 PM
CoolYoshi Wrote:Ok, FinalYoshi and Starpower, have already made Whomps, FinalYoshi's Whomps look exactly like this one but they are way more detailed, and in style. You can try to submit it but first it needs: Some shading in the body. Could use way more spots, and put a point of light on the gloves. The walking has no movement at all, it looks like the pixels are shifting up but not the shoes. And the body needs to move with it, also need more colors, on the body itself, the mouth is okay, but the body looks like a large rectangle. It needs to be improved a lot! But nice first try! Here is the M&L tutorials for help http://www.spriters-resource.com/resourc...erpage.pngCOMMENTS, IN ORDER OF COMPLAINTS
http://www.spriters-resource.com/resourc...tletut.png
1. Links to the other sheets? I've never seen them.
2. I added more spots, and it looked weird.
3. There IS a light source on the gloves.
4. The body moves to the left and right as it walks.
5. Um, it's grey. It doesn't have much color.
6. A Whomp basically IS a large rectangle.
7. I did use the tutorial.