The eyes are better but I'm just not feeling something. *hehehehe*
Maybe if you made it more like the first in http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/6997/...nteaml.png or whatever, and just made the pupil thing a pixel loonger, I'd get a more Swampert feel. I also don't know if you want to or not, but you could make the headfinnies go separate directions (http://pokemon.marriland.com/images/dp/f.../260-3.png fiucking d/p)
eeDIT: also maybe curve the belly of the beast more, idk (goddamnit dp slap me in the face)
Maybe if you made it more like the first in http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/6997/...nteaml.png or whatever, and just made the pupil thing a pixel loonger, I'd get a more Swampert feel. I also don't know if you want to or not, but you could make the headfinnies go separate directions (http://pokemon.marriland.com/images/dp/f.../260-3.png fiucking d/p)
eeDIT: also maybe curve the belly of the beast more, idk (goddamnit dp slap me in the face)