Line art is way to blocky and jagged, shading(?) needs much work, and the curves don't curve.
The leaf stem is much to stiff, the onion is ugly, though the pattern on it's hull isn't to bad.
The pellets are just... Yuck.
The fire spout is also very yuck.
The leaf stem is much to stiff, the onion is ugly, though the pattern on it's hull isn't to bad.
The pellets are just... Yuck.
The fire spout is also very yuck.