12-17-2009, 06:30 PM
(12-17-2009, 05:34 PM)GrooveMan.exe Wrote: It's a bit too simple for it to be worth submitting. You've only used 2 shades per hue, which is rather underdone, since you're not trying anything tricky with the shading and have every colour ever at your disposal. The lines of shading are also a bit flat too.
The lineart is ok - the eyebrows came out especially well - but there just nothing... 'oomph' about it. =/
Wow! You must really know your pixel art to give me good critique!
OK...... How about this then?
This time I added more colors to the shading and colored the outlines.
As for the line art, I was trying to give the Goomba a simple pose. You want me to alter it to make the pose less simple and the line-art better?