05-25-2008, 08:23 AM
As Zee said, you should first work on creating a strong line art before continuing onto shading. Additionally, there is hardly any contrast between your shades (this is shown mainly through the red and white shades). I would suggest upping the contrast, whilst also doing some hue shifting to give the colours that extra appeal. Try to be conservative with your colours as well, as you may just be using some colours that aren't noticeable without zooming, as is the case right now.