08-12-2008, 04:48 PM
Things to improve:
Needs more humour
Get better fonts from here: http://www.blambot.com/fonts.shtml (the one you're using is too bland) I recommend "Acme Secret Agent" for comics (It's available on the website mentioned in my post.)
Needs more humour
Get better fonts from here: http://www.blambot.com/fonts.shtml (the one you're using is too bland) I recommend "Acme Secret Agent" for comics (It's available on the website mentioned in my post.)