08-19-2008, 11:34 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-19-2008, 11:35 AM by Geo the Fox.)
Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.
Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.
...Fix these few things before you continue.
Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.
...Fix these few things before you continue.