08-19-2008, 11:38 AM
(08-19-2008, 11:34 AM)Geo the Fox Wrote: Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.Sure.
Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.
...Fix these few things before you continue.