it's bad
the pose is stiff and flat, you shaded just to shade and not to convey tridimensionality, the eye highlight contradicts with the shading, you used way too much straight lines.
and considering he's made of tin
![[Image: tin_can_sml.png]](http://www.doitpoms.ac.uk/tlplib/recycling-metals/figures/tin_can_sml.png)
then you should shade him like the can above. Metallic objects tend to have great contrast and reflects a lot of light.
the pose is stiff and flat, you shaded just to shade and not to convey tridimensionality, the eye highlight contradicts with the shading, you used way too much straight lines.
and considering he's made of tin
then you should shade him like the can above. Metallic objects tend to have great contrast and reflects a lot of light.
![[Image: deT1vCJ.png]](http://i.imgur.com/deT1vCJ.png)