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[Marth]

Chris, you're not being harsh enough with your crits here. Personally, I'm happy you posted because you posted the most helpful stuff. Can't wait to see the edits, and will take everything you said into close and careful consideration.

I just wish I could thank your post more than once. But next time, be a hell of alot harsher on me, trust me it helps me improve much more.