08-28-2010, 09:35 PM
Me and my constant commenting
the guy's left arm doesn't make sense and green sailor mercury saria wannabe's right foot isn't connected properly. Left and right from their perspective, not ours. Her legs are kind of big swooping curves, try to incorporate muscle shapes if you can. You could use some better colors on the white parts. In fact, better contrast all over the place probably.
Big sprites like these are pretty demanding, so don't get discouraged and don't be afraid to play around.
the guy's left arm doesn't make sense and green sailor mercury saria wannabe's right foot isn't connected properly. Left and right from their perspective, not ours. Her legs are kind of big swooping curves, try to incorporate muscle shapes if you can. You could use some better colors on the white parts. In fact, better contrast all over the place probably.
Big sprites like these are pretty demanding, so don't get discouraged and don't be afraid to play around.
![[Image: sxv5uJR.gif]](http://i.imgur.com/cqpCy.gif)