09-23-2008, 07:27 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-23-2008, 07:29 PM by ~BRICKLIN~.)
Alot of problems with this:
JPED- Never save a sprite as a JPEG or JPG, it ruins the quality of the sprite. Save as PNG.
MSPaint Default Colours- Don't use the default colours in Paint, they suck. Make your own.
Bad Lineart/Shape- N-Zs are round, this lineart is boxy making the N-Z look like a robot. Round it off like what you did to the bottom, just DON'T use the circle tool. The ears are also oddly placed, on a side view you should only see the closer ear as the farther ear will be hidden.
Odd Shading- The shading contradicts itself, if you're going to put a left and right facing sprite then shade accordingly (I think you know how to shade according to the lightsource). Also, when he's facing away that's no reason for him to be darker, he should be shaded the same.
And one more thing... Welcome to The Spriters Resource.
JPED- Never save a sprite as a JPEG or JPG, it ruins the quality of the sprite. Save as PNG.
MSPaint Default Colours- Don't use the default colours in Paint, they suck. Make your own.
Bad Lineart/Shape- N-Zs are round, this lineart is boxy making the N-Z look like a robot. Round it off like what you did to the bottom, just DON'T use the circle tool. The ears are also oddly placed, on a side view you should only see the closer ear as the farther ear will be hidden.
Odd Shading- The shading contradicts itself, if you're going to put a left and right facing sprite then shade accordingly (I think you know how to shade according to the lightsource). Also, when he's facing away that's no reason for him to be darker, he should be shaded the same.
And one more thing... Welcome to The Spriters Resource.