Actually wait I just noticed some anatomy stuff, editing forthwith~
![[Image: musclemoment.jpg]](http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/3901/musclemoment.jpg)
The blue lines are basically just where I'm establishing things in my own mind to make my corrections more sensible.
The red lines are my actual corrections.
Firstly - his collarbones are pretty high. The collarbone sits roughly level with your shoulder- the silhouette of your model looks fine, but it's just where you've actually drawn the collarbone on the texture that seems off. I've extended the line up to the shoulder to show you roughly where the collarbone should sit.
Secondly - SIXPACK. The muscle that makes a sixpack (called the rectus abdominis) sits neatly between the visible parts of the hipbone; you've shaded the muscle as though it sits on top of the hipbone. I feel like I'm overexplaining, hopefully my drawover makes it clearer than my WORDSWORDSWORDS.
Secondly, while not completely impossible, it's not common for the sixpack to start immediately below the pecs - the two segments of the rectus abdominis there are pretty difficult to develop, so they tend to be flatter and less bulgy than the segments beneath.
This tutorial is a very nice reference for drawing THE BEEF, btw.
Bonus points to me for actually kind of screwing up drawing the six pack WHILE STARING AT REFERENCE FOR IT. Ignore the actual shape, but look at the tutorial I linked and the basic positioning I've drawn for you.
The blue lines are basically just where I'm establishing things in my own mind to make my corrections more sensible.
The red lines are my actual corrections.
Firstly - his collarbones are pretty high. The collarbone sits roughly level with your shoulder- the silhouette of your model looks fine, but it's just where you've actually drawn the collarbone on the texture that seems off. I've extended the line up to the shoulder to show you roughly where the collarbone should sit.
Secondly - SIXPACK. The muscle that makes a sixpack (called the rectus abdominis) sits neatly between the visible parts of the hipbone; you've shaded the muscle as though it sits on top of the hipbone. I feel like I'm overexplaining, hopefully my drawover makes it clearer than my WORDSWORDSWORDS.
Secondly, while not completely impossible, it's not common for the sixpack to start immediately below the pecs - the two segments of the rectus abdominis there are pretty difficult to develop, so they tend to be flatter and less bulgy than the segments beneath.
This tutorial is a very nice reference for drawing THE BEEF, btw.
Bonus points to me for actually kind of screwing up drawing the six pack WHILE STARING AT REFERENCE FOR IT. Ignore the actual shape, but look at the tutorial I linked and the basic positioning I've drawn for you.
![[Image: 6WzBw.gif]](http://i.imgur.com/6WzBw.gif)