02-12-2011, 06:48 PM
Okay, I've decided I want to work more on fixing these. For right now, I think I'm going to stick to the one, since it has less that would need to be redone.
But first one thing: if you're planning on posting just to say some general insult about how "ugly and unappealing" it is, without any actual feedback, save your breath. You will be reported. If you plan on posting to say I use too many colors I will ignore your post because that means absolutely nothing. You might as well tell a writer he uses too many letters, or tell a weight lifter that he has too much muscle. Unless you plan on clarifying, save it.
Now then...
![[Image: Akumajin.png]](http://h1.ripway.com/knight9910/Akumajin.png)
For anatomy, I think the legs need some work; as is they seem to be different lengths.
I suppose my main question would be, how would YOU fix the shading? I'm having trouble seeing how to do this without losing definition.
But first one thing: if you're planning on posting just to say some general insult about how "ugly and unappealing" it is, without any actual feedback, save your breath. You will be reported. If you plan on posting to say I use too many colors I will ignore your post because that means absolutely nothing. You might as well tell a writer he uses too many letters, or tell a weight lifter that he has too much muscle. Unless you plan on clarifying, save it.
Now then...
For anatomy, I think the legs need some work; as is they seem to be different lengths.
I suppose my main question would be, how would YOU fix the shading? I'm having trouble seeing how to do this without losing definition.