Super Mario Bros. Nexgen

[Kosheh]

I don't know what to think
especially because I understand the reasoning of the Yoshi's name
and I laughed because it was so clever
(but toad's is just a giveaway, derf)



This would be a totally amazing story if the story were about two shroom addicts who fought crime while ridiculously high, the drugs clouding their judgement and making two paranoid, inferior creatures who typically can't fend for themselves the most headstrong characters in the mushroom kingdom

and then Luigi sends them creepy mail constantly for stealing their fame (and jobs) but neither of them can even recall why they're being threatened in the first place until they realize that they're actually crimefighters when they're totally strung out


hell why haven't I wrote mario fanfiction yet


but yeah, as-is it's...sort of interesting? But something about Mushroom Kingdom citizens knowing about Pokemon seems a little...fourth-wall breaking? I don't remember the exact term, but Pokemon and Mario games take place in two completely different dimensions. It'd be impossible for the two of them to have any idea who the other is. <_<

It...doesn't feel very creative yet. I'll wait until the second part before I get really critical, I guess