04-25-2011, 07:25 PM
If it says anything, "hehehe" sure doesn't sound loud or psychotic or anything on its own to me. It really just sounds like some sort of cheap "Okay this guy is laughing trust me on this" chuckle. You've gotta use more vocabulary than that if you actually want to pull readers in and properly project a scene to the audience. Otherwise you're just going to wind up writing stories akin to 90% of postings on fanfiction.net.